Part One: Loved it! There's not one thing I would change. Sadly, I can't say the same about Part Two. First, I think the POV should have stayed with Gabriel. I got a pretty good understanding of what he was going through but not enough for my liking. This was such a pivotal point in Gabriel’s life so I wanted to experience it with him. I didn’t think we learned anything from having the story from Antonio’s perspective. It was the same emotions over and over again.
Also, the story took a turn in Sapsville but since I was already hooked I didn’t mind it as much as I thought I would. It was tolerable because I always felt these emotions from Antonio in Part One and knew his feelings were heading in this direction. Now, if this were coming from Gabriel, it would have gone downhill at a lightning fast speed.
Even so, I hope we eventually get more of these two.