I love to read and chat about books. I'm always honest in my reviews and I enjoy hearing varied opinions and different point of views.
I'm just going to make a few points because I basically said everything in my updates.
I enjoyed Axton's character. He's socially awkward, shy, and a bit on the submissive side. He was cute, and I grew to like him. By midway through, I started to get into the story more and the scenery and the world drew me in.
However, I simply couldn't get past the editing issues. There were problems with spelling, it was repetitive, head-hopping, etc. It needed major editing. I heard there may be an edited version out there, but I did not have it.
I also didn't like the dialogue. It seemed like both MC's were still in high school and this is not a YA book. It didn't fit the characters or Axton's inner voice.
This book just didn't work for me. I wasn't into the characters enough to overlook these issues.